Friday, 29 May 2015


On a cloudy night Jimmy was camping in a forest next to a lake. Sitting on a log beside a warm fire, he toasted marshmallow.

Stomp stomp from behind the boy came the sound of footsteps. Turning  around the boy held out his stick like a sword. Right there stood a giant green angry sea monster.Jimmy was scared.

When Jimmy was toasting his Marshmallow he heard a scary sound. It was a scary slimy monster. Suddenly a monster was behind Jimmy he was so scared  because the monster was evil and scary with sharp pointed teeth .

The monster  did  tricks and the tricks was jumping and sitting on his  tail he was like a dog  to the boy . The boy gave some marshmallows to the monster.

Wednesday, 20 May 2015

The Switch

 A balding man strolled along the road. He had just finished his lunch and was licking his lips .’’Oh bother’’ he thought to himself, “I’ve spilt food on my brand new tie”.

Monday, 18 May 2015

The roller blade run

characters   Luke Andrew setting on the footpath by their houses.  

plot  The boys were roller blading  on the  path around their houses. They could't get down the steps  so they had  to we a ramp.

Thursday, 14 May 2015

the new baby

In reading we are learning to sum up the story in our own words.